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Haunted House Kia Ora bloggers. Can you write about this picture of a haunted house?? I had to write about how I felt when I entered the house and what I see. I also had to write it on a google slideshow. In the comments can you send me a link to your slideshow. (If you make one) I did two stories because I had to do one yesterday and today. Here is the slideshow. |
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Kia Kaha
Kia Maia
Kia Manawanui
Be Strong
Be Brave
Be Steadfast
Hi Maddison!
ReplyDeleteI love that you blogged about this. I wrote aboutthe 'Haunted House' too. You wrote a magnificent story. I was frightened. You used lots of descriptive words, I really like that. I can't believe there was a crab bigger than your mum's car! Your story is very impressive. You should be proud of yourself.
Overall, you did a fantastic job. I enjoyed reading your blogpost. (Thanks for commenting on my blogpost. To answer your question, yes, the seniors get to play with it too.) Have a lovely afternoon, blog you later!!!
Kia Haumaru
Kia kaha
E noho whakamiharo
Be safe
Be strong
Stay awesome!!!
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ReplyDeleteHello again Maddison! I can see I'm going to be busy keeping up with your blog posts during our distance learning. Ka pai for the creative writing. I particularly like the build-up of suspense in your first few lines. How could you help the audience truly experience the fear you felt when being held in the crab's claws - could you explain how you would react physically, eg. 'my heart was racing'? Thanks once again for sharing your learning. Keep up the hard work!
ReplyDeleteGreat story writing Maddison! I don't think I would enjoy being in that creepy looking house either. I love your story about Buster. I wonder what the prime minister thought about the photos of Buster having fun on his skateboard?! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteFrom Austin's mum.
Hi Madison I'm India from marshland school and I read all your stories they are amazing i don't think i could write anything like them at all. You are so talented keep up the good work.
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