Kia Ora Bloggers. What writing have you done in lockdown?? I have done writing for the week. We had to write about a picture and finish of what they had started. My favourite story that I wrote was the FBI Case which I wrote today. Here it comes . . . .
Kia Kaha Bloggers. If you have any time, can you post a comment that is helpful, thoughtful and positive.
Talofa lava Maddison!
ReplyDeleteYour blog post is amazing. I love how you always put a question near the start. My answer is: a lot. It is really fun reading blog posts and commenting on them. I really like the different colours you have used. I also like the writing you have done, it is fantastic! The FBI case really freaked me out, I got goosebumps!
Overall, outstanding blog post. I enjoyed reading it. See you next week in the google meet.
Blog you later!
Malo e lelei Maddison, wow what a tense piece of writing - you've really created an exciting atmosphere through your choice of language features. I really like the use of present tense to make the audience feel that they are 'in the moment' with you. What made this your favourite piece of writing for the week? Have a wonderful weekend and I'll see you in rehearsals on Monday. :-)
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Maddison, Its me Aamena from Manukau. Wow! I very liked the stories you've written! I very liked the FBI case you wrote really freaked me out! That was my favorite as well! Except the FBI case one which one would rather be your favourite? Very Very Great Writing! Thanks for sharing your learning, please visit my blog on https://aamenas.blogspot.com
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