Thursday 23 April 2020

My Creative Writing

Kia Ora bloggers!! Yesterday, I wrote my own story, it's called The Trampoline Jumpers. I also watched a short movie of a Dad building a trampoline for his daughter for her birthday. That night animals were jumping on the trampoline and their dog wanted to do the same thing. In the morning she went outside and her dog ran and jumped on the trampoline. Here is a link to the video.

And here is the link to my story slideshow.



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6 comments:

  1. Mrs Paterson23 April 2020 at 14:03

    Hi Maddison, wow, I was so engaged reading your story. My imagination was working hard and I could see a movie of your story playing in my mind as I read. Your story presentation was fabulous. Do you have a trampoline?
    Our daughter and son in law are moving house soon. One of the things they really wanted at a new home was a nice big, flat area for a trampolene, for our two active little grandsons. They got a nice big back section and will buy a trampolene when they move.
    Keep safe and well in your family bubble. I will be looking forward to seeing more posts of your super term two work.

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    1. Anonymous24 April 2020 at 11:48

      We don't have a trampoline. But at our old house we had one but it broke.

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  2. Anonymous23 April 2020 at 15:34

    Talofa Maddison,
    It was a very funny and cute video. I really like your story. It's really cool how you ended it with 'They became friends forever!'. I like how you added in some more details and how the story, kind of, related to the video. The animals are so cute!

    Awesome blogpost, Maddi. I love the title, The Trampoline Jumpers. Well done. Blog you later.💻🖥💻

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    1. Anonymous24 April 2020 at 11:51

      Thanks for the comment. You should try do your own story and post it. I got the video from the writing page, you scroll down and it will be under the writing groups. You should try it!!

      Maddison

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  3. Romana23 April 2020 at 20:02

    Your imagination never ceases to amaze me. The ideas you came up with from watching a little clip about a dad building a trampoline were very creative. Would love to hear if there was another chapter to this story.
    Have you created a title page for your writing?

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    1. Anonymous24 April 2020 at 12:49

      Yes it is on slide 1. I will change it to on the very first slide.

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